The revision is better, but imho, the greens are still over the top and unrealistic, especially the green tree. If you look at Peter's' treatment, he has subdued and softened the background and other areas and yet made the tree, including the foreground tree limbs, stand out in a subtle way without allowing them to go over the top or be too dominant. Try to isolate areas, and darken and/or soften them. Don't sharpen the water or the highlight areas. Somebody once taught me this. In fact, in most of my nature related images, I only sharpen selected areas in combination with darkening and/or lightening selected areas. It gives a subtle effect and brings forward elements you want to emphasize while making other areas recede. I may talk a good game, but I am still learning and studying Peter's excellent painterly version. I bet I can take lessons from him.
JR