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RMW

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Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« on: October 22, 2017, 05:51:47 am »

Hello All.
Learning to compose with a minimum of elements.
All comments welcome.
Richard
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #1 on: October 22, 2017, 09:09:10 am »

absolutely smashing !
If printing large, i would consider content aware fill on the last few specular highlights on the water ending them just above the branch.
Do you plan to offer prints for sale ?
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #2 on: October 22, 2017, 09:25:57 am »

I like the framing here a lot, but I like the color one ("Lone Spartina"). I'd like to see a color version of this one.
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2017, 11:34:47 am »

Thank you Eric and "degrub'.

Here's a color version.
Eric, What do you think ?

Mr. "degrub": Glad you like it. Will look into those specular highlights. I do have this for sale. It's app. 17.5" x 11.5". It's not yet up on my website.

Richard

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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #4 on: October 22, 2017, 12:03:04 pm »

That version looks really nice to me.
Those last few specular highlights don't spoil it for me, but I also think Degrub's suggestion might even strengthen it a bit more.
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #5 on: October 23, 2017, 03:49:09 am »

I have a slight preference for the color version but both are stunning.
Well done.
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #6 on: October 23, 2017, 01:41:01 pm »

Very good. I wonder how it would look like with the plant in focus.

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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #7 on: October 24, 2017, 09:23:33 pm »

Thank you Francois.
Glad you enjoy both of them.
Your support to all of us is irreplaceable.

Paulo, here's the only image I have with the grass plant in focus.
Curious to know how it looks to you.
Richard
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #8 on: October 24, 2017, 09:52:58 pm »

The slightly out-of-focus grass didn't bother me very much, but seeing this new, sharper image I like this one best so far.

Eric
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #9 on: October 26, 2017, 11:34:29 am »

I find this last version more natural. My vote would go this this one.
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Re: Deep In The Southern Marsh 4
« Reply #10 on: October 26, 2017, 06:38:03 pm »

Thank you Francois and Eric. It's a fine pleasure to get your feedbacks. Richard
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