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Todd Suttles

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« on: October 20, 2017, 10:28:05 pm »

A shot from South Georgia of the "contemporary south". Any appeal and C&C?
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Re: "733"
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2017, 01:37:40 pm »

Good photo for your American South series.
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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2017, 09:39:55 am »

Not strong. Interesting tableau. You're ending up with hundreds and hundreds of "lines"...something to think about. They take over somewhat...the character of the tableau. /B
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« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2017, 11:37:24 am »

I kind-of like it, but I like lines. 

The shadow detail generally seems adequate except around the dollar sign in the middle.  [I'm not sure to what it is attached.]  Or if you can bring up the shadow detail generally it might provide the lines with more of a home?

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« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2017, 12:03:47 pm »

The subject is pretty good, don't know whether the "frame" out of this pillars (?) is too much, maybe one would be enough? Well, I wasn't there, and it's a complex scene, maybe a less "rectangular" composition would have been an option? Just thinking aloud.
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