Hello Larry,
Thank you for all this work. It's interesting- and educational- to see what edits you've made.
To me, your warm and colorful version, is like a full orchestra of an image. Mine, on the other hand, is more like a single instrument playing softly- perhaps an acoustic guitar.
Two different performances interpreting one subject. If Pablo Casals and YoYo Ma can do it, why not us ?
Thanks a lot again.
Richard