Aloha,
The first color image is nice, the clouds seem a bit hot, but maybe thats just in the jpg.
The second is really wonderful, did you consider cropping and getting rid of the soft cloud at the top, something like this?
sorry if screwing with your image pisses you off, I deleted it off my hard drive after I did a hatchet job on it.
but anyway maybe it brings out the guts of the story more. maybe no crop on the right just the foreground idk...
But really an outstanding image either way, one of the best zion pieces I've seen on here, jealous!