I think the second is the best composition although the processing in this as well as the others is not successful. In the second in particular (as well as the others) there is a harshness and chattery feeling from hyper contrast and lack of subtle gradation of tone throughout the image - which I think it needs. In the second the highlights/near highlights seem to be blown which doesn't help either. The coloration is not terribly helpful perhaps just b/w.
