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dwdallam

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« on: April 09, 2009, 12:25:13 AM »

A shoot I did a while back.

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« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 12:37:03 AM »

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A shoot I did a while back.

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This is a cool shot.  You chose your lighting carefully, and the burning of the corners on the left makes it all the stronger.  I think cropping the window on the right just past the white frame would strengthen the shot, as the extra bit of casing in the shadow make the image a bit too wide, which in turn pulls emphasis from the subject and her reflection.  Well done.

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« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 01:20:37 AM »

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This is a cool shot.  You chose your lighting carefully, and the burning of the corners on the left makes it all the stronger.  I think cropping the window on the right just past the white frame would strengthen the shot, as the extra bit of casing in the shadow make the image a bit too wide, which in turn pulls emphasis from the subject and her reflection.  Well done.

John

Agreed - lovely portrait. Nice work.

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« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 03:15:05 AM »

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Agreed - lovely portrait. Nice work.

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« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 04:36:44 AM »

If I was going to be picky I'd remove some of the red from her right eye especially, but other than that, well done!

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« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 06:27:18 AM »

Okay! We've got Phallic Symbolism, Show Us Your Rocks, and now Reflections. It's a good topic.

Here's my reflections. Or should that be be, here are my reflections. Never mind!

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« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2009, 12:55:14 PM »

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Okay! We've got Phallic Symbolism, Show Us Your Rocks, and now Reflections. It's a good topic.

Here's my reflections. Or should that be be, here are my reflections. Never mind!

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The shadow in the reflection seems very intrusive, particularly on the wall.

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« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2009, 07:38:20 PM »

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The shadow in the reflection seems very intrusive, particularly on the wall.

Jeremy

Good point! Fixed!  

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