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Timo Löfgren

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« on: December 18, 2008, 12:41:44 PM »

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« Reply #1 on: December 18, 2008, 03:22:58 PM »

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Very nice, I do like this.
If it were mine, I would clone out the very light area in the top left hand corner, it draws my eye away from the subject.

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« Reply #2 on: December 18, 2008, 03:38:38 PM »

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Very nice, I do like this.
If it were mine, I would clone out the very light area in the top left hand corner, it draws my eye away from the subject.

Can you be more specific?  I like the composition, Timo.  The rocks look like alligator heads looking forward and to the left, toward the light.

John
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« Reply #3 on: December 19, 2008, 02:42:41 AM »

I think Dave is referring to the little pink patch on the left edge.  It's a bit distracting.  I love this kind of long exposure image where the waves look like mist...

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« Reply #4 on: December 19, 2008, 04:13:55 AM »

I like it a lot. I do agree that the pink lighted area should go, but that's really up to you.
Would you be so kind and give us some specs of the shot?
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« Reply #5 on: December 20, 2008, 02:40:24 AM »

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Can you be more specific?  I like the composition, Timo.  The rocks look like alligator heads looking forward and to the left, toward the light.

John


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« Reply #6 on: December 20, 2008, 08:15:34 AM »

I enjoy the dark and foreboding mood of the image.  Excellent composition, nice subtle colors.  The luminosity of the FG rocks is excellent.
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