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maddogmurph

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Yucca's
« on: August 05, 2014, 08:49:40 pm »

Thoughts ?  Critique?
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Re: Yucca's
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2014, 04:29:19 am »

My preference goes to #1, the light is more interesting than in the other ones. The way the plants are lit by the golden light is very good. I would crop tighter though, feel there is too much empty sky on top.

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Re: Yucca's
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2014, 07:15:43 am »

I agree with Paulo, and by cropping tighter I would suggest eliminating the sky altogether. By doing that, you not only improve the composition but then you can increase exposure and open up the plant area of the photo.
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Re: Yucca's
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2014, 10:33:13 am »

Agree, #1 the best, and I would trim a bit of the sky, leaving enough to show the golden horizon and a bit of blue above.
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Re: Yucca's
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2014, 03:35:13 pm »

I've honestly been trying to push #1 around, and it feels like any direction I take it makes it look more digital than natural.
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