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Riaan van Wyk
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Thoughts please?
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Quote from: Riaan van Wyk on January 21, 2014, 01:34:41 pm
Thoughts please?
What about getting a T/S lens?
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I love the clouds, but the foreground is rather uninviting. Do you have photographs from other views?
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Honestly, the foreground oof is unappealing. I agree a T/S might be good or a wide angle lens from a higher vantage point. I do think this kind of composition warrants a lot of experimentation. Good luck!
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Hi Riaan
I also found the foreground distracting.
My thought was that the exposure was either too short or too long?
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I think there may have been some nice possibilities with this shot...some great colors...the reddish browns and the grays. I would definitely be in this camp...
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the foreground oof is unappealing.
. I would have most definitely stopped the motion of the surf decay to get the bubbles crisp. As well, the aspect ratio of the frame does not help..."tall/narrow"...it would be nice to see the frame somewhat wider...to let the remains of the surf be able "to move outward" to the right/left as they appear to be because of the lens.
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Thanks for looking everyone, it's appreciated.
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