I like this. I'm trying to figure out how you got your abstracted version from this though. Somehow (nearly) all the green went away.
When you do in-camera motion techniques, you will notice that colours become softer and more muted. Sometimes I like the effect, other times I try to bring back the original colours and density. In the straight shot, I simply hit "auto smart fix" in PS Elements, and it literally will adjust everything- constrast, colour, brightness, etc- skewing everything towards what I call a "pop" style. Sort of like Fuji Velvia vs most other other film. So this latter image is a"pop" style rendering, which I did not bother to adjust. See below for samples:
All flat lighting, but you can readily see the truer more denser colours in the straight image vs the double exposure with camera movement.
Hope that answers your question.
JR