No problem, Todd.
Look, keep in mind that I am not a LR Ninja, and certainly am no guru on BW processing so keep in mind that I may be wrong and there may be something you can do here. My comment was simply based on spending 2 minutes on your image in LR. My thought was "move on, nothing to see here" for the reasons I set out in my first reply. But just remember you should not always believe everything some random guy says on the internet, even if the random guy is sincere. Maybe I am missing something!
The basic adjustments to the colour image are something you should be doing on every single RAW image that comes out of your camera apart from the outright rejects. These basic adjustments take less than 2 minutes on most images, at least to get you to a good point of departure. FWIW my own workflow, after I have selected my images, goes like this: Lens Correct (just tick Profile Corrections and Remove CA); crop if needed; set a nice looking white balance; adjust exposure if needed; adjust contrast if needed (usually upwards until the mid tones look OK); set white and black points using the whites and blacks sliders; adjust highlights (usually downwards); adjust shadows (usually upwards); and finally move the clarity and vibrance sliders around until everything looks OK.
Once you learn to do this correctly then you will hopefully have an image that looks OK, and then you can decide whether to to dive off and start playing with the tone curve, HSL, the local adjustment tools etc. But always start with the basic adjustments on every image and you will quickly develop a feel for what is going on in an image.