This is a hard crowd to sell an image to.
It's not really a matter of selling anything to anyone, Chris. The thing is that we all see so many pictures
every single day that the value of everything is inevitably diminished: we become bored and blasé.
Have you ever asked yourself how come so many model/actor/rock star relationships die the death, when logic would suggest such rich, beautiful people have it made for ever? I reran a video on Rod Stewart last night, and it touched on the breakdown of one of his marriages - I forget which, but that's my fault, not his - and he recounts broken-heartedly seeking help from a Beverly Hills shrink who told him to forget it, because once you've seen one friggin' **** you've seen 'em all. You see what I mean? Values or relative values. Maybe.
That's the problem with visual overload: it desensitizes us all, just as pornography is reputed to do. There's nothing amiss with your shot, but nothing new, either. That is almost impossible to achieve, for all of us. Some spend hours doing multi-shots (stitching) of their subject just in order to squeeze out a tad more (or a lot more) detail; but who the hell cares or notices other than themselves and only because they have to, having put themselves to all that trouble?
But then for some, the technique is the end in itself, and if it floats their boat, cool.
Rob C