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Roberto Frieri
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July 13, 2011, 03:49:11 pm »
I think I would have liked to see a better connection between them both, the expression of the Father to the Son, the composition that includes the dark pole is rather a distraction, the editing is very good considering the harsh lighting.
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July 13, 2011, 05:08:17 pm »
Beautiful picture; the pole gives it spacial reference and the tonality looks like the best wet processing. Be proud.
One criticism? Get rid of that tiny white spot on the child's lip - it distracts me.
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July 13, 2011, 06:57:11 pm »
I'd like it better if the kid's face wasn't entirely in shadow.
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Quote from: popnfresh on July 13, 2011, 06:57:11 pm
I'd like it better if the kid's face wasn't entirely in shadow.
But it's not; and that's exactly why the tonality looks so great: you get depth and range of visual/emotional response.
And that white spot still bugs me.
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