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semillerimages

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Abandoned Shelter
« on: October 07, 2010, 04:37:20 pm »
Here is another shot from the same day of 'abandoned house'
This is a 3 shot HDR from SNS-HDR and a Canon 1DSMark2 with a 28mm f2.8 lens.
Please critique away! :)
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Re: Abandoned Shelter
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2010, 06:54:45 pm »
"important feature" of the image was bothering me, so i played with the image some to draw attention to particular portions of the composition. Just some ideas.
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Re: Abandoned Shelter
« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2010, 07:27:27 pm »
I'm honestly not sure about this one, although I find myself wanting to like it.  I'd say either the original or the bottom crop...

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Re: Abandoned Shelter
« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2010, 09:50:11 pm »
I'll go out on a limb and say that I prefer Degrub's first crop. With just the roof and the sky it is wonderfully surreal.

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Re: Abandoned Shelter
« Reply #4 on: October 08, 2010, 04:43:09 am »
I'm with Eric on this one. The thing that bothers me a bit (in the original) is that the roofline is in the middle of the image.
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