Brian,
I really like this photo. What makes it work for me is the quality of the light and the overall composition, with the fence doing the job of leading the eye in. Also, the desaturation works well.
However it is a shame that the foreground looks out of focus. I can live with the nearest part of the fence being off, but not the jogger, who is the main subject. Also I think the image needs to be tilted a bit clockwise.
But overall, I still like it.
Ed