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maddogmurph
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Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
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December 30, 2018, 09:52:57 pm »
Also, is there enough shadow detail? I honestly just think the composition might be unbalanced. I'm not sure it's fixable.
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The water doesn't seem to fall vertically?
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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
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December 31, 2018, 07:55:19 am »
Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on December 30, 2018, 10:03:11 pm
The water doesn't seem to fall vertically?
A Bit... the water is placed on the edge of the frame and slightly distorted. Wide angle lens being the cause?
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December 31, 2018, 04:23:37 pm »
In both cases, the waterfall is too close to the left edge, thus making the composition “unbalanced”.
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December 31, 2018, 06:36:44 pm »
There is something "artificial" on the left side of the waterfall, some kind of movement that disturbs me.
Maybe the right part of the picture was cropped and is missing?
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Alan Klein
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December 31, 2018, 09:51:20 pm »
You've got two subjects competing with each other. The waterfalls and the tree on the right with too much space between them.
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