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maddogmurph

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Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« on: December 30, 2018, 09:52:57 pm »

Also, is there enough shadow detail? I honestly just think the composition might be unbalanced. I'm not sure it's fixable.
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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2018, 10:03:11 pm »

The water doesn't seem to fall vertically?

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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2018, 07:55:19 am »

The water doesn't seem to fall vertically?

A Bit... the water is placed on the edge of the frame and slightly distorted. Wide angle lens being the cause?


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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« Reply #3 on: December 31, 2018, 04:23:37 pm »

In both cases, the waterfall is too close to the left edge, thus making the composition  “unbalanced”.
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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« Reply #4 on: December 31, 2018, 06:36:44 pm »

There is something "artificial" on the left side of the waterfall, some kind of movement that disturbs me.
Maybe the right part of the picture was cropped and is missing?
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Re: Color Spray - Square Crop or Full?
« Reply #5 on: December 31, 2018, 09:51:20 pm »

You've got two subjects competing with each other.  The waterfalls and the tree on the right with too much space between them. 
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