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drmike

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Lamps
« on: March 08, 2016, 12:41:30 pm »
What do you make of this please?



Obviously I like it but ...

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Bruce Cox

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Re: Lamps
« Reply #1 on: March 08, 2016, 01:17:55 pm »
It's an elegant naturally and or industrially occurring progression and the gradient of the sky lends a hand.

Preferring more complex images as I do, I would like to see more of the building top or something else too.
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Re: Lamps
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2016, 02:07:33 pm »
Nice one Bruce :) Actually I removed some buildings to simplify it :)
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Re: Lamps
« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2016, 11:02:15 am »
Love your 'Lamps' image. Actually having part of the building really anchors the image and gives it an abstract-architectural quality. Removing the building will not necessarily make it better, rather it will have an even more abstract and minimalist look. Different, maybe even more playful and whimsical.

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Re: Lamps
« Reply #4 on: March 09, 2016, 01:05:16 pm »
At first glance I was tempted to suggest removing the bit of building that remains, but I now feel that bit is quite necessary.

A fine shot.
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