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The Bridge!
« on: September 27, 2015, 06:16:52 pm »
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Larry Heath

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Re: The Bridge!
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2015, 09:08:04 pm »
Two things.

One, the horizon doesn’t seem quite level.
Two, the verticals of the closer tower are so far from parallel to the edge of the frame it is a bit visually disturbing.

Easy fixes.  Like this 21683711696_3862fcc8ec_b.jpg by Larry Heath, on Flickr

Lovely image otherwise, I quite like it myself.
« Last Edit: September 27, 2015, 09:46:48 pm by Larry Heath »
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