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stamper
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June 13, 2015, 10:00:51 am »
Too busy?
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Kerry L
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Re: Boatyard
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June 13, 2015, 11:23:41 am »
Quote from: stamper on June 13, 2015, 10:00:51 am
Too busy?
Not so much "busy". The fence and especially the double fence are very distracting. It's almost a moiré effect.
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luxborealis
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June 13, 2015, 12:26:11 pm »
Quote from: stamper on June 13, 2015, 10:00:51 am
Too busy?
Definitely too busy - but it works! After all, what would you expect in a real, working boatyard?!? It also has design and the ramp leading to who knows where.
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Eric Myrvaagnes
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June 13, 2015, 01:17:23 pm »
Too busy for viewers who prefer to grasp everything in an image in the first two seconds.
However, to me, it is
about
busy-ness, and as I spend time exploring all parts of it, I find it holds together quite well.
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June 15, 2015, 05:11:24 am »
If the intent was to show a busy scene, then it work perfectly and I could easily spend a hour looking at all the details of this photo.
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June 15, 2015, 05:29:27 am »
Thanks for the feedback. I was initially attracted by what is in the center of the image and had a crop in mind and then I realized that the information at the left hand side and the right hand side had an important part to play in the scene. So no crop.
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