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Woodstork Airborne
« on: November 23, 2024, 11:25:50 am »

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Re: Woodstork Airborne
« Reply #1 on: November 28, 2024, 06:21:16 am »

The frame is perfectly filled with diagonals (body & wings)… Superb photo.
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Re: Woodstork Airborne
« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2024, 10:33:42 am »

I like the graphic element of the diagonals but there are a couple of issues. One the bird has no where to go and there is a lot of negative space behind it. I see the tension between getting the wings filling the frame but I"m not sure it works. The wings are not sharp. I don't think they *need* to be but they should either be sharp or have obvious motion blur.
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Re: Woodstork Airborne
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2024, 02:39:01 pm »

Thanks, Unfamiliar. I don't see a woodstork very often, and catching one is unusual.
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