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Jaemie

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Market Ceiling - Revisited
« on: January 14, 2016, 05:23:22 am »
Annoying soda case removed, more emphasis on tones, depth, and structure.

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Re: Market Ceiling - Revisited
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2016, 08:04:28 am »
Beautiful colors, tones, subject. Again, maybe bring up deep shadows just a bit? Also, I might like to see a bit more at top...the uppermost horiz. pipe...don't know without seeing.
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Re: Market Ceiling - Revisited
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2016, 01:06:35 am »
Thank you. Perhaps I will bring something wider next week - a 35 or even the 15.
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