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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: fdisilvestro on March 01, 2015, 08:57:33 am

Title: At the airshow
Post by: fdisilvestro on March 01, 2015, 08:57:33 am

A couple of images from today's airshow at Avalon (SW of Melbourne, Australia).
Jet fighter launching flares. In the second image the jet was backlit and the flare iluminated the bottom, revealing a face-like figure

Thanks for watching, CxC welcome

Title: Re: At the airshow
Post by: AFairley on March 02, 2015, 12:58:05 am

Love the light in the bottom one, but would like a little more space above and to the left to give the plane a little space to fly into, composition-wise.  Easy enough to add if the actual image is that tight.

Title: Re: At the airshow
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on March 02, 2015, 01:40:19 am

Francisco, both are extraordinarily well done, congrats!

Title: Re: At the airshow
Post by: fdisilvestro on March 02, 2015, 02:21:13 am

Thank you very much for you comments, Slobodan and AFairley

AFairley: The original image has actually more space above and to the left, maybe a I cropped too much. I will review it.

Title: Re: At the airshow
Post by: francois on March 02, 2015, 07:50:46 am

Bravo, both are fantastic.

Title: Re: At the airshow
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 02, 2015, 10:53:53 am

Quote from: francois on March 02, 2015, 07:50:46 am

Bravo, both are fantastic.

+1.