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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Slobodan Blagojevic on February 08, 2015, 11:58:35 am

Title: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on February 08, 2015, 11:58:35 am
I am reposting this with a different crop. Actually, without any crop, other than for perspective correction. A slightly different take on the lonely tree theme:

(https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7372/16279796958_6bfd122e66_c.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/qNAdss)
Lonely In Chicago (https://flic.kr/p/qNAdss) by Slobodan Blagojevic (https://www.flickr.com/people/20843597@N05/), on Flickr
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 08, 2015, 01:37:33 pm
Works for me. I think I prefer this to the cropped version (even though my name isn't Russ).
The colors are just right. BW would not work for this one.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on February 08, 2015, 01:43:50 pm
... The colors are just right. BW would not work for this one.

Indeed. B&W would convey just one aspect of the image: lonely nature against man-made structures. Color adds another: warmth of the nature vs. coldness of the artificial. And again, as I mentioned on another thread, warm colors appear to advance, cool colors appear to recede, creating a sense of depth.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: sarrasani on February 08, 2015, 04:32:00 pm
amazing that yellow trace. Really well composed and convincing image.
all the best,
sandro
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: seamus finn on February 08, 2015, 05:07:50 pm
Indeed. B&W would convey just one aspect of the image: lonely nature against man-made structures. Color adds another: warmth of the nature vs. coldness of the artificial. And again, as I mentioned on another thread, warm colors appear to advance, cool colors appear to recede, creating a sense of depth.

Exactly. Lovely image, very graphic, helps to understand the relationship between different colours and the impact they have on one another.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: BobDavid on February 08, 2015, 09:20:36 pm
The tree makes the shot and the title. Nice interplay between warm tree and cool (as in blueish) buildings.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: mbaginy on February 09, 2015, 05:17:51 am
Great shot, like the blue, nice yellow highlight.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: SanderKikkert on February 09, 2015, 05:21:05 am
Even though he (the tree) is on top of most of it, he's essentially just lurking in the shadows of those metal, glass and stone giants..

Very good Slobodan, love it, Regards, Sander
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: francois on February 09, 2015, 06:32:33 am
I like the blueish buildings along with the bright yellow treeā€¦
Well seen, as usual!
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: David Eckels on February 09, 2015, 08:00:10 am
I like to try for an 8x10 vertical crop, but in this case, I think the 2x3 gives a better sense that the buildings are "looking down" on this poor, pitiful, and lonely tree. Except, he's not really alone because he has that greenish companion to his right; clone it out?  ;) The blue-yellow creates a lovely contrast (of course). And congrats on being recognized as one of the top city photographers!
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: RSL on February 09, 2015, 08:51:51 am
It's a fine shot, Slobodan. Very nice.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on February 09, 2015, 12:21:36 pm
Looks very good against a black background.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Misirlou on February 09, 2015, 03:18:06 pm
Yeah, I like it
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: muntanela on February 10, 2015, 09:14:04 am
Your urban shots are always very interesting (and instructive).
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: RSL on February 10, 2015, 10:40:06 am
(and instructive).

+1
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: rgs on February 19, 2015, 08:28:53 pm
Love the tree on the rooftop. We have one of those here in OKC. It makes for an interesting juxtaposition. Well done. Very nice shot.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Arlen on February 20, 2015, 03:11:18 pm
Very strong. I especially like to stand back and view it as an abstract of color and shape collections.
Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on February 20, 2015, 04:34:30 pm
Your urban shots are always very interesting (and instructive).

In that spirit, I am posting the original, unprocessed photo:

Title: Re: Lonely in Chicago
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 20, 2015, 06:03:03 pm
In that spirit, I am posting the original, unprocessed photo:


Gosh, that looks terrible! I think you need to get some expert PP advice, maybe from that guy whose initials are SB.   ;D