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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on August 30, 2014, 10:59:24 am

Title: lake sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on August 30, 2014, 10:59:24 am
Comments?

Jeremy
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: shawnino on August 30, 2014, 11:01:13 am
I like it.
Unusual crop/perspective that I might not have chosen.
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: RSL on August 30, 2014, 04:46:39 pm
Very pretty, Jeremy.
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Tony Jay on August 30, 2014, 04:50:29 pm
Nice Jeremy!

Is this Lake Eacham?

Tony Jay
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: BernardLanguillier on August 31, 2014, 12:12:21 am
Nice light. I love what's going on in the left upper part of the image with the mist and the warm light on the trees.

On the other hand, I am not sure that the bottom 20% bring value.

Cheers,
Bernard
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 01, 2014, 04:00:59 am
Nice Jeremy!

Is this Lake Eacham?

Yes. I had a great time in the tablelands.

Jeremy
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Tony Jay on September 01, 2014, 04:57:29 am
Yes. I had a great time in the tablelands.

Jeremy
Yes some great photographic grist for the mill up there.
We stayed for some of our trip just on the southern edge of that National Park in which Lake Eacham is situated.
Unfortunately for us it was so windy, rainy, and cold that I cannot remember even picking my camera up in the time that we were there!
You seem to have had the better part of the weather.

Tony Jay
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Bruce Cox on September 02, 2014, 11:32:00 am
Nice light. I love what's going on in the left upper part of the image with the mist and the warm light on the trees.

On the other hand, I am not sure that the bottom 20% bring value.

Cheers,
Bernard


I agree; it's beautiful.  I wonder if lower contrast in the bottom 20% would help.

Bruce
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: luxborealis on September 02, 2014, 07:36:05 pm
I like it.
Unusual crop/perspective that I might not have chosen.

I agree. I feel a bit closed IB, not bring able to see the big picture off to the left which, with the "atmosphere" might just be of more visual interest. It leaves me wanting more; perhaps that's a good thing.
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: RSL on September 02, 2014, 09:42:11 pm
The complaints make it clear you haven't cropped it enough, Jeremy.
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: luxborealis on September 03, 2014, 08:23:08 pm
The complaints make it clear you haven't cropped it enough, Jeremy.

Quite the opposite, in this case, Russ!
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: RSL on September 03, 2014, 09:34:35 pm
No kidding. I thought cropping was the solution to any problem.
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 04, 2014, 02:19:39 pm
I don't want to crop it, but I've added a couple of masks in LR to try Bruce's suggestion and to darken the area of reflected sky. I think it's an improvement.

Jeremy
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Bruce Cox on September 04, 2014, 02:52:57 pm
I don't want to crop it, but I've added a couple of masks in LR to try Bruce's suggestion and to darken the area of reflected sky. I think it's an improvement.

Jeremy

Thumbs up.

Bruce
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 04, 2014, 03:11:22 pm
Where is the sunset?
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: seamus finn on September 04, 2014, 03:37:59 pm
It's a beautiful shot of reflected images, but it's been done a thousands times before. The catchword here is DIFFERENT!
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Petrus on September 04, 2014, 05:19:15 pm
Maybe I have had one or two gin&tonics too many, but I would not have bothered to RAW convert this one in the first place if I had happened to shoot it in the first place.

In general I have to say I admire all the people who bother to give encouraging and favorable comments for pictures which really are not worth the bandwidth.

Not aimed to OP (only), but to 80% of the images presented here for review.

Sorry to be rude, but someone should put the cat on the table (like we say in these parts). 
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 08, 2014, 02:50:36 pm
Well, that's me told. I'm not offended by you, Petri, since I have no reason to suppose that your opinion is worth such a response.

You have some interesting snaps on your Flickr site, but it's fairly obvious that landscape isn't your forte. It does appear, though, that you embody the maxim that the best is the enemy of the good. A photograph doesn't have to be perfect, indeed it doesn't have to be very good (in your terms, worth bothering to convert from raw) in order to provide interest, in order for comments on it to be educational and to help the photographer to improve his technique. This is a forum in which critiques are invited, not a gallery.

Your arrogant, dismissive attitude and de haut en bas contempt is unhelpful. I draw, and will continue I hope to draw, encouragement from constructive comments. That's what this site - at least, this area of the site - is for.

Jeremy
Title: Re: lake sunset
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 08, 2014, 02:51:13 pm
Where is the sunset?

It's implied  ;)

Jeremy