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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: William Westergren on June 11, 2014, 04:45:48 am

Title: Portrait
Post by: William Westergren on June 11, 2014, 04:45:48 am

Hi,
Quite recent portrait taken with D700 and 85mm. Two strobes with main light through a silver umbrella.

Cheers!

Westergren Photography Website (http://www.westergrenphoto.com)

Title: Re: Portrait
Post by: David Anderson on June 11, 2014, 05:01:01 am

Bit of a near miss for me sorry.

The leading eye looks a bit dopey until you zoom right in on it and makes the model look disinterested.
I do like the hard light as it suits the look of the model, though the pose is a little awkward.

Title: Re: Portrait
Post by: William Westergren on June 11, 2014, 05:02:56 am

Thanks David for your constructive comment. Appreciated!

Title: Re: Portrait
Post by: wmchauncey on June 11, 2014, 06:59:11 am

IMHO, you seem to have gone out of your way to make the model appear somewhat less than attractive.  Gritty noise disturbs me.    ;)