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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: sierraman on June 10, 2014, 11:15:39 am

Title: Aspens
Post by: sierraman on June 10, 2014, 11:15:39 am

Not sure if there is enough contrasting light here for a good B&W image.

Title: Re: Aspens
Post by: Roberto Frieri on June 10, 2014, 12:35:27 pm

Well, on my iPhone, this image looks great! Many compliments.

Title: Re: Aspens
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 10, 2014, 02:23:44 pm

Quote from: sierraman on June 10, 2014, 11:15:39 am

Not sure if there is enough contrasting light here for a good B&W image.

I think there is - it looks good to me. It might look better with slightly darker shadows, but I'm nitpicking.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Aspens
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 10, 2014, 03:09:36 pm

In terms of composition, shadows on the ground deserve a bit more space. If not other shots from the scene, then at least cropping the top out on this one to 8x10 proportion might help.

Title: Re: Aspens
Post by: sierraman on June 10, 2014, 03:16:39 pm

Thanks guys for looking. I'll try to clean it up a bit more.  :)

Title: Re: Aspens
Post by: walter.sk on June 11, 2014, 02:43:13 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 10, 2014, 03:09:36 pm

In terms of composition, shadows on the ground deserve a bit more space. If not other shots from the scene, then at least cropping the top out on this one to 8x10 proportion might help.

+1