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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on May 29, 2014, 02:39:36 pm

Title: avoca
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 29, 2014, 02:39:36 pm

A walk in the Irish countryside.

Jeremy

Title: Re: avoca
Post by: mal mcilwraith on May 29, 2014, 03:41:08 pm

Jeremy

A lovely part of the world undoubtedly. I personally would crop the image on the right to clear away the bare tree that partly creeps in on that side and I would also crop on the left because I would like the yellow bushes to be the lead in on the left.

I am a photoshop boy so I would probably tweak the image to clarify the structure of your path and those lovely yellow bushes.

Here is my crop of your image, please forgive the liberty I have taken.

But that is just my take, others will see it differently.

Mal
Australia

Title: Re: avoca
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 30, 2014, 02:51:48 am

Fair points. I rather liked the tree on the right, but I'd wondered about cropping a bit off the left.

Jeremy