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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: sierraman on May 17, 2014, 07:01:42 pm

Title: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: sierraman on May 17, 2014, 07:01:42 pm

I don't usually shoot B&W images so I'm not sure how this looks to those of you who normally do. Does the image have enough/too much contrast? Maybe its just not a good image.

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: francois on May 19, 2014, 06:48:10 am

I'm not a B&W specialist but I'd like to see a bit more contrast in the mid-tones and the white in the clouds could be a little lighter.
That said, if you're happy with your shot, keep it as it is.

Di you take it from the promontory over Wahweap Marina?

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: sierraman on May 19, 2014, 09:52:13 am

Quote from: francois on May 19, 2014, 06:48:10 am

I'm not a B&W specialist but I'd like to see a bit more contrast in the mid-tones and the white in the clouds could be a little lighter.
That said, if you're happy with your shot, keep it as it is.

Di you take it from the promontory over Wahweap Marina?

I guess I need to work on my B&W post processing. Yes it was taken from the promontory above the marina. Super windy that evening, thought we were going to get blown off the hill down to the marina.  :)

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 19, 2014, 10:06:28 am

I agree with Francois' suggestions, but don't overdo it. This is a wonderful image, worth reworking until it really sings.

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: francois on May 19, 2014, 10:07:23 am

I've tried something that looks different (better or worse?).

Yes, that promontory can be really windy and dusty but easily accessible place with a good vista.

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: francois on May 19, 2014, 10:08:17 am

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 19, 2014, 10:06:28 am

I agree with Francois' suggestions, but don't overdo it. This is a wonderful image, worth reworking until it really sings.

I would go with your suggestions, I'm just a amateur with B&W.
 ;)

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: RSL on May 19, 2014, 10:21:12 am

Yes!

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: sierraman on May 19, 2014, 12:17:41 pm

Quote from: francois on May 19, 2014, 10:07:23 am

I've tried something that looks different (better or worse?).

Yes, that promontory can be really windy and dusty but easily accessible place with a good vista.

Thanks Francois for your help!  :)

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 19, 2014, 01:15:15 pm

I think you've nailed it now, Sierraman.

Title: Re: Storm over Lake Powell
Post by: francois on May 20, 2014, 04:52:40 am

Quote from: sierraman on May 19, 2014, 12:17:41 pm

Thanks Francois for your help!  :)

You're welcome but this was just a quick & dirty try...