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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: David Jilek on May 15, 2014, 01:07:59 pm

Title: Bark
Post by: David Jilek on May 15, 2014, 01:07:59 pm

I was thinking of doing a book of organic finds. Just to see where it goes. Maybe with a wood box for the images. Something I could send to Art directors.

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 15, 2014, 02:15:46 pm

Interesting image, and an interesting idea: good luck. It may be just me, of course, but I'm a little bothered by the grain in the table not being quite vertical. Picky, I know.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 15, 2014, 02:34:32 pm

Ah, the vertical police has spoken! ;) ;D

Gorgeous tonalities, btw!

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: David Jilek on May 15, 2014, 02:59:09 pm

Well I guess it comes down to either the grain being vertical or the nails being straight across the bottom edge. Which is more important?
David

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: wolfnowl on May 17, 2014, 01:49:55 am

I noticed the grain before the nails too...

Mike.

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: David Jilek on May 17, 2014, 09:58:42 am

Okay I went back and fixed the grain!
Thanks
David

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: luxborealis on May 17, 2014, 10:12:55 am

Lovely lighting and tonality. Beautifully done.

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: cjogo on May 17, 2014, 12:27:04 pm

Every detail /comp just right on this one -- good concept for a project /book........

Title: Re: Bark
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 17, 2014, 04:56:36 pm

Quote from: luxborealis on May 17, 2014, 10:12:55 am

Lovely lighting and tonality. Beautifully done.

+1.