Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Bruce Cox on May 09, 2014, 09:45:25 am
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C & C?
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Bruce,
I'm actually more interested in the metaphor contained in the image and in your title. Not being familiar with mockingbird eggs, are you saying here that the eggs are dead like the leaf and therefore the mockingbirds that would hatch are silent? Sorry...I've been writing this morning and I see this as a haiga.
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Bruce,
I'm actually more interested in the metaphor contained in the image and in your title. Not being familiar with mockingbird eggs, are you saying here that the eggs are dead like the leaf and therefore the mockingbirds that would hatch are silent? Sorry...I've been writing this morning and I see this as a haiga.
No, it is a temporal effect. [Their parents were still quite interested] They are too young and inclosed [they may have been muttering "quietly], and for all I know may have little to say for themselves. But I thought someone should.
Had it not made the title too long I would have included something about the generational difference between the birds and the leaf. Time glues a lot of stuff together.
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If this post-processing makes them look dead, I may need to do something about it. The act of cramming the camera and tripod into the foliage makes the nest look neglected by raining debris into it. However, it also generated my good luck of the talking leaf. I try not to be in complete control of my technique.
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I try not to be in complete control of my technique.
I'm really, really good at that one. ;)
Interesting colours on the eggs - almost solarised in appearance.
Jeremy
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I'm really, really good at that one. ;)
Interesting colours on the eggs - almost solarised in appearance.
Jeremy
Yes, they are solarized by the Difference setting under Apply Image. Three other Apply Image modes were applied as well.
Attached is a more representative detail in case you are looking for Mockingbirds.
Bruce
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Attached is a more representative detail
I agree with that.
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Attached is a more representative detail
I agree with that.
Then maybe this will fly too. And then modified in the general direction of Eric's fallowing comments.
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The new one works for me. I could stand for pumping up the leaf a little bit toward the original, but leave the leaves alone.
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The new one works for me. I could stand for pumping up the leaf a little bit toward the original, but leave the leaves alone.
Sort of like this?
Squared up by trimming the left side 5/11/2014
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Sort of like this?
Yes.
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Hi Bruce
This is my first comment on your work - often you leave me wondering what the hell you smoke (and that I would not mind a puff of it!)
The original image and - particularly the title - somehow connected with me and I think I have finally seen the same thing you have! (No, I have not been smoking..)
I really like the original post and no further explanations or variations are necessary.
William
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Hi Bruce
This is my first comment on your work - often you leave me wondering what the hell you smoke (and that I would not mind a puff of it!)
The original image and - particularly the title - somehow connected with me and I think I have finally seen the same thing you have! (No, I have not been smoking..)
I really like the original post and no further explanations or variations are necessary.
William
Thanks. This may not be necessary, but I like it a little better. Without changing the general idea of the first version, I have circled around it considerably.
5/13/2014 Modified to reduce mold.