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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on May 06, 2014, 07:56:36 pm

Title: Provisions
Post by: Todd Suttles on May 06, 2014, 07:56:36 pm: C&C requested & appreciated, -t
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 06, 2014, 09:22:35 pm: Absolutely brilliant!!!
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 07, 2014, 12:02:05 am: Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 06, 2014, 09:22:35 pm
Absolutely brilliant!!!
+1.
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: wolfnowl on May 07, 2014, 02:46:44 am: Does ask a lot of questions!

Mike.
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: francois on May 07, 2014, 04:54:17 am: Great, I like the metallic look.
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: RSL on May 07, 2014, 11:04:39 am: Very nice, Todd.
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: Todd Suttles on May 07, 2014, 12:58:41 pm: Thanks everyone for the nods. Much appreciated.
Anything that is "working" in this image is something I learned here over the past couple months and I am sure there will be more roasting turds as Russ calls them :)
Any ideas on how to improve it?
and thanks, -t
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: Bruce Cox on May 07, 2014, 01:36:08 pm: I doubt the lower left hand quadrant has the native potential of the other three. Tweaking it may get you only so far. The forceful addition of YOUR NAME HERE, or a miniture bailling machine etc could perk it up.
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: Harald L on May 07, 2014, 06:11:45 pm: Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 06, 2014, 09:22:35 pm
Absolutely brilliant!!!

+1

Harald
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: seamus finn on May 07, 2014, 07:06:58 pm: Yes,sir!
Title: Re: Provisions
Post by: luxborealis on May 08, 2014, 10:15:30 pm: I guess I'm the one detractor. To me, it's a photographer's photograph as we can appreciate the contrast in tones and textures, and the overall sharpness and technical skill. I "get it" in that here is also a contrast in the wrapped straw and the unwrapped straw. But I fail to be hooked like the rest. I'm trying to see more in it, but I'm just not "there".