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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: David Jilek on April 28, 2014, 09:32:16 pm

Title: White Oak
Post by: David Jilek on April 28, 2014, 09:32:16 pm

White Oak leaf on black

Title: Re: White Oak
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on April 29, 2014, 12:19:43 pm

I like the tonalities and the shapes a lot. I'm not sure the little reflections at the bottom add anything, though.

Jeremy

Title: Re: White Oak
Post by: sdwilsonsct on April 29, 2014, 03:30:27 pm

Quote from: kikashi on April 29, 2014, 12:19:43 pm

I'm not sure the little reflections at the bottom add anything, though.

To me they convey the leathery nature of the leaf. Nice composition.

Title: Re: White Oak
Post by: RSL on April 29, 2014, 03:39:42 pm

Weston would love it.

Title: Re: White Oak
Post by: David Jilek on April 29, 2014, 04:52:21 pm

Its funny that you say that. When it came out of the print I said to myself." Thank you Edward" He has been a great influence on many of us. I wonder how many of the young photographers would stop and look at his work today.