Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on April 28, 2014, 03:50:10 pm
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Which composition do you prefer, if either, and suggestions to improve anything else requested. Thanks, -t
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Both are fine. If you decide to go with the first, darken the roof a bit, so that it does not lead the eye out of the image too soon.
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As Slobodan says, you need the roof – it helps to
"frame" (ooo I hate that concept) complete the image but tone it down. Consider also some slight perspective distortion correction; I get the feeling I'm looking down into this space. Consider also trimming a bit off the bottom to allow the aspect ratio to better reflect the long narrow wall of the garage.
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Both excellent comments. I prefer the second one, but if you keep the first darkening the top would be good.
Mike.
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+1.
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Both are fine. If you decide to go with the first, darken the roof a bit, so that it does not lead the eye out of the image too soon.
As Slobodan says, you need the roof – it helps to "frame" (ooo I hate that concept) complete the image but tone it down. Consider also some slight perspective distortion correction; I get the feeling I'm looking down into this space. Consider also trimming a bit off the bottom to allow the aspect ratio to better reflect the long narrow wall of the garage.
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Thank you, Two newer crops based on your suggestions - ?
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Crop 04 works best for me.