Luminous Landscape Forum

The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on April 27, 2014, 12:49:38 pm

Title: dawn fire
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on April 27, 2014, 12:49:38 pm

At Bryce. Thoughts?

Jeremy

Title: Re: dawn fire
Post by: RSL on April 27, 2014, 02:27:40 pm

A thought: Bryce cañon is one of God's especially wonderful pieces of architecture.

Title: Re: dawn fire
Post by: luxborealis on April 27, 2014, 02:29:03 pm

Wonderful backlit glow here. Re: composition - tilted down slightly to "finish" the bottom area would be nice.

I feel like an observer here, rather than being part of a photo that I can move through, but that's just the nature of a long telephoto shot with no leading lines or diagonals.

Title: Re: dawn fire
Post by: francois on April 28, 2014, 05:00:43 am

I like both the colors and the compositions. The blocks of rocks seem arranged in a perpendicular way, like the streets of some cities. The orange glow is magical… One can imagine a fire, hidden, somewhere behind those rock walls.