Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: wmchauncey on April 26, 2014, 03:24:28 pm
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For your consideration and comments...my latest creation from my mind's eye!
(http://i329.photobucket.com/albums/l383/chauncey43/rainbow-dunes.jpg) (http://s329.photobucket.com/user/chauncey43/media/rainbow-dunes.jpg.html)
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Beautiful as is but would prefer to see the main rainbow more off-centre and more space to the right of the secondary rainbow. As it is, it comes across as a grab shot, but a beautiful one!
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I think it is great.
As you say, it is a creation and, as such, I like it! The colours and the picture remind me of a John Paul Caponigro picture of Zabriskie Point.
William
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Beautiful as is but would prefer to see the main rainbow more off-centre and more space to the right of the secondary rainbow. As it is, it comes across as a grab shot, but a beautiful one!
I agree. Can you move the rainbows to the left?
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Hey guys they're all on layers in Photoshop...no problem to shift them.
Do we have a consensus on where to move them? ???
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Depends on whether nor not you want two rainbows. If you move them right you'll have one. If you move them left you'll have two in a different place.
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And what planet is this, exactly? Unusual to have a rainbow with so much sand... not enough moisture in the air! ;D
Still, fun and nicely done.
Mike.
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I would move the rainbows to the left and keep both.
Of course, you could put the rainbows upside down and really freak us all out. ;D
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Or...I could put them...better not go there... ::)
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I'll just say bravo!
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Just for giggles...I did move the rainbows...what say you now??
(http://i329.photobucket.com/albums/l383/chauncey43/rainbow-over-dune-redeux-copy.jpg) (http://s329.photobucket.com/user/chauncey43/media/rainbow-over-dune-redeux-copy.jpg.html)
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Better, but... I dunno, it looks great!
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You've probably upset the "purists" with this offering but it is very likeable. Worth hanging?
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I'd hang this, stamper. Provokes the imagination. Even though I know what it is, it makes me wonder what (where) it could be.
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How does it look without the rainbows?
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The second one works better for composition. It is a good bit of fun and a pleasant result. The thing that bothers me is the direction of light on the dunes makes the rainbow impossible... or is this what it looks like behind a rainbow?
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And what planet is this, exactly? Unusual to have a rainbow with so much sand... not enough moisture in the air!
The thing that bothers me is the direction of light on the dunes makes the rainbow impossible
A purist is one that uses only the left side of his brain...probability only shoots in jpeg. ;D
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I like the new version! The inconsistencies don't bother me at all. After all, dreams are often inconsistent.
Of course, you could also add a pot of gold at the foot of each rainbow. :D