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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Bruce Cox on April 14, 2014, 03:24:51 pm

Title: Notation
Post by: Bruce Cox on April 14, 2014, 03:24:51 pm

Please critique.

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: RSL on April 14, 2014, 03:36:22 pm

?

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: Bruce Cox on April 14, 2014, 10:15:52 pm

further study

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: wolfnowl on April 15, 2014, 02:01:53 am

Quote from: RSL on April 14, 2014, 03:36:22 pm

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I'm with Russ on these...

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on April 15, 2014, 06:14:41 pm

Lovely color harmony in the second shot, between blueberries and ink.

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: Bruce Cox on April 15, 2014, 07:57:44 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on April 15, 2014, 06:14:41 pm

Lovely color harmony in the second shot, between blueberries and ink.

Thanks, the berries also almost make sense as something that could be counted or collected.  Maybe if I had cleaned or waxxed the hose it would be more fun, if less natural.  The hose seems like cross-outs on a larger scale to me.  This frame is OK with the card and stone more yellow, but at the expense of the ink and berries. 
I like this frame a little more than the other two.

Bruce

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on April 15, 2014, 11:35:13 pm

The second one works best for me too.

Title: Re: Notation
Post by: stamper on April 16, 2014, 05:09:33 am

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Title: Re: Notation
Post by: Harald L on April 17, 2014, 06:16:33 am

And don't forget to change your PIN daily...

Harald