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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Riaan van Wyk on February 03, 2014, 01:16:44 pm

Title: 01/02/2014
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on February 03, 2014, 01:16:44 pm

Thoughts please?

Title: Re: 01/02/2014
Post by: David Eckels on February 03, 2014, 01:25:52 pm

I love the colors, but I find it oddly disturbing, almost a feeling of vertigo. It's OK if that's what you wanted. It could have been nice to experiment with shorter and longer exposures. From a composition point of view, a nice set of three wet rocks might help ;) FWIW The colors are very soothing maybe that's the tension I feel. Or I could have an ear infection ;)

Title: Re: 01/02/2014
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on February 03, 2014, 01:29:14 pm

I like it a lot and think its works, but needs a haircut:

Title: Re: 01/02/2014
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on February 03, 2014, 05:06:16 pm

Quote from: Riaan van Wyk on February 03, 2014, 01:16:44 pm

Thoughts please?

Someone pulled out the bath plug?

It is unsettling, as David points out, but I like it.

Jeremy

Title: Re: 01/02/2014
Post by: David Eckels on February 03, 2014, 07:34:17 pm

Christoph's edit works, but I still get the same impression, somewhat less though.

Title: Re: 01/02/2014
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on February 04, 2014, 08:54:34 am

Thanks for looking everyone, it's appreciated.