Luminous Landscape Forum

The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: William Walker on February 01, 2014, 06:00:55 am

Title: Sunny Harbour
Post by: William Walker on February 01, 2014, 06:00:55 am

There is something I am not sure of with this picture. I would have shot it differently with the benefit of hindsight.
I won't say what it is and am keen to see if anyone else picks up the same feeling...

Thanks
William

Title: Re: Sunny Harbour
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on February 01, 2014, 06:05:17 am

Well - the rock is a menace to the ships should they drive on it.
Its waiting to ambush them ...

Title: Re: Sunny Harbour
Post by: David Eckels on February 01, 2014, 09:31:30 am

Hate to say it, but I'd crop the lower left, maintain same aspect ratio, to remove the brick bldg in the distance and place the rock more off center, but that's a creative decision.

Title: Re: Sunny Harbour
Post by: William Walker on February 02, 2014, 07:03:44 am

David, you are more or less touching on what worries me.

I feel I should have pointed the camera a bit more to the right - I feel the boats on the right need a little more space - and all I needed to do was concentrate a little more on my composition!

Oh well...