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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:04:08 pm

Title: River Delta
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:04:08 pm

Thoughts, advice if any??

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: WalterEG on January 30, 2014, 05:26:33 pm

Beware of a loud knock on the door — it may be a visit from the Horizon Police.

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:31:23 pm

LOL !!!!!!!! Thanks, didn't even see it!

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:35:22 pm

Quote from: WalterEG on January 30, 2014, 05:26:33 pm

Beware of a loud knock on the door — it may be a visit from the Horizon Police.

After 6 months probation and 20 hours of community service...

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: PeterAit on January 30, 2014, 05:38:02 pm

Lovely photo! I love the road wending off into the distance. The horizon seems a bit tilted, though.

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: wolfnowl on January 30, 2014, 06:26:11 pm

Quote from: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:35:22 pm

After 6 months probation and 20 hours of community service...

Much better.  I wasn't sure if the house was tilting or just really old and falling over.  All in all a lovely pastoral scene.  Shadows seem a little blocked up, but that could just be eyes...

Mike.

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 11:01:52 pm

Shadows opened a bit, tilt adjust a little more. ?

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on January 31, 2014, 03:38:28 am

Quote from: Todd Suttles on January 30, 2014, 05:35:22 pm

After 6 months probation and 20 hours of community service...

The community sends thanks for its new-found ability to stand upright!

Jeremy

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: francois on January 31, 2014, 06:13:51 am

I like the last two versions but can't yet decide between #2 and #3. I'm leaning toward #2…

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: RSL on January 31, 2014, 03:38:48 pm

Very pleasant, Todd.

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 31, 2014, 04:38:12 pm

Quote from: RSL on January 31, 2014, 03:38:48 pm

Very pleasant, Todd.

+1.

Title: Re: River Delta
Post by: Todd Suttles on February 01, 2014, 09:00:44 am

Thanks again to you all for helping me to learn how to "see" better. I appreciate your giving me your time and experience, -todd