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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Riaan van Wyk on January 26, 2014, 04:08:44 am

Title: 26/01/2014
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on January 26, 2014, 04:08:44 am

Thoughts please?

Title: Re: 26/01/2014
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on January 26, 2014, 09:20:05 am

Quote from: Riaan van Wyk on January 26, 2014, 04:08:44 am

Thoughts please?

This time it works very well.
I like the moving foam looking like bits of an old perforated-tape and how it goes through the curve.
The sharp sand below it creates a nice contrast.
My two suggestions to make it even better would be to try that in landscape format and show less sky.
I think you're getting very close to something you are trying in these last posts.
Cheers
~Chris

Title: Re: 26/01/2014
Post by: Riaan van Wyk on January 26, 2014, 11:46:47 am

Thanks for looking Chris. The pic is from last year sometime, title was absentmindedly written with a recent date. These backflows from the surf are usually narrow, horizontal compositions doesn't work.

Title: Re: 26/01/2014
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on January 26, 2014, 12:09:49 pm

Quote from: Riaan van Wyk on January 26, 2014, 11:46:47 am

Thanks for looking Chris. The pic is from last year sometime, title was absentmindedly written with a recent date. These backflows from the surf are usually narrow, horizontal compositions doesn't work.

You might need to get two of them to work together for a landscape format.
Just an idea...