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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on December 14, 2013, 10:23:19 pm

Title: Shapes
Post by: Todd Suttles on December 14, 2013, 10:23:19 pm
C & C very much appreciated. Specifically the phone line. I printed this at 20x20 and while visible to my eye, the amount it intrudes in the image is offset, I hoped, by the "truthfulness" it lends the image? I think any larger than 20x20 it would have to come out.

I have posted the out of camera capture and what I did with it in Lr. Thanks in advance,
-t
Title: Re: Shapes
Post by: Ed Blagden on December 15, 2013, 12:02:32 am
Phone lines against open sky are easy to clone out using the spot removal tool if you choose to do so.

Processing is fine.  I might quibble with the sepia style look but that is an aesthetic choice, not a technical one.  I think that the choice of a square crop is OK but you could consider moving it up a bit to allow the tree some breathing room.
Title: Re: Shapes
Post by: Todd Suttles on December 15, 2013, 10:14:03 am
Thanks Ed, Ill try that