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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: sdwilsonsct on September 14, 2013, 04:29:32 pm

Title: Northern church
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 14, 2013, 04:29:32 pm

Comments?
The text beneath the statue in #3 is "Inspiration".

Title: Re: Northern church
Post by: David Eckels on September 14, 2013, 04:50:07 pm

Very interesting. Would be interesting to see a shot of "Inspiration" capturing more of the window panel in the upper right and some of the window panel in the lower left for balance perhaps. To me, the lighting is almost a bit sinister; don't know is that's intentional. Either way, I think it works. A very interesting building.

Title: Re: Northern church
Post by: Harald L on September 14, 2013, 06:38:25 pm

Interesting building, indeed. Where did you capture it? I like the second one and the detail in #3. The Tower in the first picture looks somewhat distorted (by the WA-lens, I assume) and distracts me.

I'd consider a tad more brightness, as David already said it appears a little bit sinister.

Harald

Title: Re: Northern church
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 14, 2013, 07:37:48 pm

Quote from: David Eckels on September 14, 2013, 04:50:07 pm

Would be interesting to see a shot of "Inspiration" capturing more of the window panel in the upper right and some of the window panel in the lower left for balance perhaps.

Thanks, Dave. That was indeed how I framed Inspiration. Shoulda left it alone.

Harald, this is Kiruna, Sweden. I share your dissatisfaction with the distortion.

Title: Re: Northern church
Post by: Rob C on September 15, 2013, 05:23:24 am

#2 Psycho.

Rob C

Title: Re: Northern church
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 15, 2013, 11:42:53 am

Quote from: Rob C on September 15, 2013, 05:23:24 am

#2 Psycho.

This church was the inspiration for a fictional church in a rather grisly novel, "Sun Storm". Maybe I can sell it as a cover photo?