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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: Shakyphoto (Slim) on March 15, 2013, 10:36:49 pm

Title: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: Shakyphoto (Slim) on March 15, 2013, 10:36:49 pm

My recent photo on my blog.  Taken last year at the Air Show in San Francisco.
Let me know what you think.

(http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7135/8161490088_e2a66991bf_b.jpg)

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: Iluvmycam on March 16, 2013, 01:34:39 pm

Love it!

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: Walt Roycraft on March 16, 2013, 07:35:15 pm

Very nice!
A couple not picks, The boat on the very bottom left is cut off. I would actually like a bit more room on the left side, feels a little cramped. If there is no more room then clone out the cut off boat. And there is another boat on the right cut off, clone it out as well.

Oh, and I love the title :)

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: francois on March 18, 2013, 06:26:50 am

Fantastic, well seen. The only improvement I could imagine would be, as Walt suggested, more room on the left side.

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: Shakyphoto (Slim) on March 18, 2013, 12:30:17 pm

Unfortunately no can do.  Just looked at the raw and the left edge is the limit.

Hey it could have been worse, I could have had the right side cropped off too much!

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: francois on March 18, 2013, 12:56:46 pm

Quote from: Slim on March 18, 2013, 12:30:17 pm

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Hey it could have been worse, I could have had the right side cropped off too much!

I agree 100%, cropping the right side would have been very bad.

Title: Re: Escape From Alcatraz
Post by: Walt Roycraft on March 19, 2013, 07:31:14 am

Quote from: Slim on March 18, 2013, 12:30:17 pm

Unfortunately no can do.  Just looked at the raw and the left edge is the limit.

Hey it could have been worse, I could have had the right side cropped off too much!

 :D