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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: cjogo on February 26, 2013, 12:49:11 pm

Title: MArble to the Max
Post by: cjogo on February 26, 2013, 12:49:11 pm

A hotel in BRNO -- massive marble walls and a creative stairs

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 26, 2013, 05:41:53 pm

You have a great eye for these architectural nuggets.

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: cjogo on February 26, 2013, 07:49:30 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 26, 2013, 05:41:53 pm

You have a great eye for these architectural nuggets.

thanks kindly ;) -- guess I have been searching out nuggets ~ for 30+ years

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: marvpelkey on February 26, 2013, 11:06:29 pm

Imo, a perfect subject for black and white study of tones only. My favourite part is the top left, with the triangular black space adjacent to the white half circle. Vey nice.

Marv

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: cjogo on February 27, 2013, 12:10:05 am

THANKS  >>   ;)I liked the reflection of the lamp assemble  & the continuance of the railing > in the marble wall ..& just how the stairs floated in ..

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: Chris Calohan on February 27, 2013, 12:16:53 pm

I love everyting about this image but the right side...it's just too, too much conflict with the rest of the image.

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: cjogo on February 27, 2013, 01:01:05 pm

Maybe its two images --  ?? I never crop much -- just in the camera whilst shooting.

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: Chris Calohan on February 27, 2013, 01:33:05 pm

Perhaps?

(http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8234/8513937476_dd93264aa5_b.jpg)

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: cjogo on February 27, 2013, 06:01:07 pm

Much better ~~!Thanks      Have not looked at that image for 15 years ...like the new perspective ;)

Title: Re: MArble to the Max
Post by: francois on February 28, 2013, 06:09:19 am

Quote from: Chris Calohan on February 27, 2013, 01:33:05 pm

Perhaps?

(http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8234/8513937476_dd93264aa5_b.jpg)

It seems a bit simpler, in a good way. I prefer this version but the original was already very good.