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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: cjogo on January 12, 2013, 06:58:10 pm

Title: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: cjogo on January 12, 2013, 06:58:10 pm

SWC Hassy ...   walking the hills  ..... http://photos.imageevent.com/estrump/fineart/large/CHILD%20IN%20WINDOW_1.jpg

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: Chris Calohan on January 12, 2013, 10:01:29 pm

Whites are a bit blown out in the window frame. It's a good shot but requires more PP work to make it for my eyes.

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: cjogo on January 13, 2013, 03:31:44 am

Thanks ...Sure there is more on neg or the scan > on those whites...the print has detail?  Maybe something with loading up the Adobe 1998 & the conversion.  I have calibrated monitors ... but things slip through.   Will check on that one...

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: Rob C on January 13, 2013, 10:20:44 am

And there I was, expecting a car. Oy vey, already.

;-)

Rob C

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: RSL on January 13, 2013, 10:38:30 am

Fine shot, CJ, but I agree with Chris that it needs a bit more pp work.

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: cjogo on January 13, 2013, 07:16:31 pm

Looks to be closer to 240 on the whites on the original ...  The one I posted looks 251 .. pretty burn-out ::  Lets try this one ...thanks

As I you can see > the frame was just painted  a clean- bright white wash ..  but I hand metered this one , as always .. and did a minus-1 development.

Title: Re: Mexico ..GTO
Post by: Chris Calohan on January 13, 2013, 10:11:42 pm

Mas Mejor!