Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: William Walker on May 02, 2012, 11:25:40 am
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It would take a brave man or a fool to follow Timo - you decide ???
I really liked this the first time I saw it, and I kept coming back to it.
I hope you see something in it too...
Thanks
William
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I really liked this the first time I saw it, and I kept coming back to it.
I hope you see something in it too...
It's a pretty scene, but for me it's wrecked by the twigs in the foreground; they don't add interest, they just stick into the river and get in the way. I imagine they'd be tricky to clone out. It might be worth a try, though.
Jeremy
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the twigs in the foreground;
Jeremy
Hi Jeremy
Thanks for the comment, they are actually leafless trees down in the river...I don't know if that changes it for you? (I cloned one out on the right-hand side because you could not see the base of the tree - otherwise the others did no worry me.)
William
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Hi Jeremy
Thanks for the comment, they are actually leafless trees down in the river...I don't know if that changes it for you?
No, sadly, it doesn't: it's the sight of them that (for me) spoils the image, not what they actually are.
Jeremy
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Hi William,
I like the motion and energy in this. The dead trees provide a bit of punctuation, contrast and interest. And woodpecker habitat. Leave 'em in.
Scott
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I'm afraid I'm with Jeremy on this one. Maybe from a different angle? I agree that removing the leafless trees from the finished image would be a pain in the neck.
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It's a nice sidelight demo. That's about all.