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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on December 21, 2011, 04:12:27 pm

Title: Still Life
Post by: RSL on December 21, 2011, 04:12:27 pm

Here's one I sort of passed over at first, but I keep coming back to it.

Title: Re: Still Life
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on December 21, 2011, 04:15:00 pm

I think I understand why. It's attractive.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Still Life
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 21, 2011, 04:59:21 pm

Quote from: kikashi on December 21, 2011, 04:15:00 pm

I think I understand why. It's attractive.

Jeremy

Yes.
(And exhibits the Hand of Man, so it must be a landscape, not a still life.    ;D  )

Eric

Title: Re: Still Life
Post by: wolfnowl on December 21, 2011, 05:15:08 pm

Having a 90 deg in a stove pipe is never a good idea, but it's a great image of what not to do!  All seriousness aside, there is a certain cachet to the forms.

Mike.

Title: Re: Still Life
Post by: Rob C on December 21, 2011, 05:20:32 pm

Bird with chick.

Rob C

Title: Re: Still Life
Post by: Bruce Cox on December 21, 2011, 07:19:51 pm

Quote from: Rob C on December 21, 2011, 05:20:32 pm

Bird with chick.

Rob C

Regurgitated food aside, I am distracted from the fine points of the composition by the shadows of the stove and pipe flatting out and receding behind the wall to the right.  Other screens may not have this problem, but mine could use some more shadow detail.

Bruce