Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: PasZ on September 22, 2011, 06:28:02 pm
Title: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
Post by: PasZ on September 22, 2011, 06:28:02 pm
Hi there! Im posting my first photo in the forum It was taken with my new D90 gripped with my new Tokina 12-24 F4 MkII @12mm
My english is very poor, sorry!
Delta Trees
(http://i.minus.com/i9Ab1WfZhrzDX.jpg)
Please criticize everything that you think necessary that I want to learn!
If you want to visit my webpage is www.pasz.com.ar
Thanks PasZ
Title: Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
Post by: Jose L on September 26, 2011, 02:22:55 pm
Creo que exposición y definición estan conseguidas. Para mi creo que sobra la parte inferior de los arbustos que no añade nada a tu fotografía, quiza distrae. Enhorabuena y saludos.
Title: Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
Post by: PasZ on September 29, 2011, 08:10:42 pm
Creo que exposición y definición estan conseguidas. Para mi creo que sobra la parte inferior de los arbustos que no añade nada a tu fotografía, quiza distrae. Enhorabuena y saludos.
Muchas gracias por tu comentario, agrega mucho tu aporte. Saludos! Pascual
Title: Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
Post by: John R on September 29, 2011, 08:38:54 pm
The dark deep shaded area just above the ground is almost black and detracts from the beautiful upward flow of the image. Particularly because it goes from light area to a dark area of almsot no interest or detail. At the same time, I think if the trees were not so dark in the front, the image would be better. Sort of like adding fill light to the scene. But maybe bracketing would achieve a better result. These extremes are almost unavoidable in a scene like this. But keep at it because the composition is good and the feeling of exhuberance between the sun and the trees is definetely there.
JMR
Title: Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
Post by: Justan on September 30, 2011, 01:17:21 pm
John covered the topic pretty well. There is detail in the darker areas so perhaps a linear dodge or screen applied with a gradient filter would recover the darker areas without making an impact on the top part of the image.