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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Dave (Isle of Skye) on September 15, 2011, 10:17:04 am

Title: Concrete wall
Post by: Dave (Isle of Skye) on September 15, 2011, 10:17:04 am

Hi all,

Another weird and wonderful image that I recently found lurking at the back of my hard disk.

Very stark, very abstract.

Good/Bad/Indifferent?

Dave (UK)

Title: Re: Concrete wall
Post by: francois on September 15, 2011, 11:37:53 am

I like the geometric study very much but I've not made up my mind on the B/W treatment, I need more time!

Title: Re: Concrete wall
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on September 16, 2011, 03:41:10 am

It's interesting, certainly, and holds attention. There seems to me to be a halo around the protrusion at the upper left, though.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Concrete wall
Post by: Dave (Isle of Skye) on September 16, 2011, 05:02:28 am

Quote from: kikashi on September 16, 2011, 03:41:10 am

It's interesting, certainly, and holds attention. There seems to me to be a halo around the protrusion at the upper left, though.

Jeremy

Hi Jeremy, yes I noticed that too, but by way of an excuse, it really is an old image and might even have been taken with my old digital rebel and converted to B/W something like seven or eight years ago or perhaps even longer.

Dave (UK)